Yo GeneralEtrius,
Your words are coming off like detritus,
Some of this stuff is so lame,
You know it,
Yet you can't take a flame,
Honor and praise from Stardock you crave,
But everyone knows that rap is headed to the grave!
Find a new medium to express yourself,
As I find this tedium causes me to enrage myself...
*and now for a quote from a REAL rapper*
"So check yourself before you wreck yourself cause shotgun bullets are bad for your health"
Courtesy of Ice Cube...
So what do you think General? Is this one good enough to 'join the club'?
Don't get offended as it is done in good spirits...