bring it on

I will now give out a complement and a suggestion.

First, the complement. (And some minor mitpicking):

Cool story, but try to hit Enter when someone new is speaking.

Second, the suggestion:

This would make a great custom campaign, which makes TA's release date seem that much farther off.  

Chapter 2:Return to Earth(part 1:The Plan)
On the Soaring Knight, a large meeting was taking place.The meeting includes some of the best ground soldiers the Terran Knights have ever had.
John:If i can have everyones attention please?
The soldiers looked at John.
John:Hi, today i want to discuss a plan, this plan is very importent so pay attention!
A large hologram of the solar system appears.
John:For the past 30 years our plantet Earth has belonged to the pirates ever scince the galaxy was ruined in the Great Dark Aplopcolypse War(NOTE from the author:Dark Apocolypse is the name of a mission in the Dark Avatar campaign).
John:Now it's time to take it back!I have ordered a transport to bring us back to the planet, we'll use stealth shields to sneak past orbiting ships.
The hologram changes to a map of the Earth's surface.
John:We'll have to land somewhere in the area of the United States.The pirates have a base in the ruins of Washington D.C.
The map zooms in to the location were New England once was.
John:We'll have to land were New Hampshire once was.Now for those who don't know, New Hampshire is were the location of a research lab somewhere in the mountains to the north.This is were the Terran Alliance was once developing weapons that would be used to freeze incoming enemy ships,during the DAW the weapons were to be launched at Drengin Troop Transports.But the weapons gps system malfunctioned and acidently hit Manchester, thus throwing it into a never ending winter, small houses were burried leaving only large appartment and offices were half burried.Making it like antarctica.Now we must get dropped of there so we can make our way to DC and take back the Earth.Who's with me?
Soldiers:We are!
Onboard the transport John preparing himself.
Inside the transport was several tanks and 2 troop carrying vehicles.
John get's on top of one and oders the troops to look him.
John:For the Terran Knights!
Soldiers:For the Terran Knights!

That's all for part 1 of chapter 2.Part 2 coming soon!

Chapter 2:Return to Earth(part 2:Ground Subzero)
On Earth the transport had landed in Manchester NH.The transport's cargo bay unloaded it's cargo and one of the troop transporting vehicles, John was arming himself with an A27-TAW assualt rifle.
The vehicle doors open and the troops including John get out.
John:Boys welcome to Ground Subzero.Now we'll need to get across the city and on to the highway.Acording to my gps location i say that were on top of the ruins of the Verision Arena.Quickly get the tanks into hover mode!
The tanks and transports begin to hover.
John and his crew get into one of the tanks.The tanks head for the highway then all of a sudden the tanks come under attack by mobile defense cannons that were built to protect the armory located in the city.
John:We'll take care of the cannons, you guys get out of here!
The tanks split up with John's tank.
John:fire!
The tank fires it's weapons at the defense cannons,The cannons blow up.John's tank regroups with the others, then they get on the highway and head to D.C.

That's all for Chapter 2 part 2,part 3 coming soon!

Chapter 2:Return to Earth (Part 3:DC)
The scene begins with the pirates and Terran Knights in a feirce battle.John and the pirate leader chasing eachother through the streets as the battle unfolds.The chase ends at a museum.The pirate leader heads inside. John follows him. But he quickly loses him. John now finds himself in a "History's Worst Monsters" exibit. In front of John was a Big Daddy suit from Bioshock, a T-rex skeleton and a Storm Trooper maniquin.
John: Damn these are some ugly monster.
Space pirate leader: Not as ugly as you!
John turned his head around and sees the pirate leader with a knife in his left hand. John pulls out his plasma rifle and points it at the pirate leader's.
John:Don't think about it!
Space pirate leader: I do any thing but please don't kill me?
John: First I want all of the planets you own, second I want all of your Star ship designs and third want all of your techs.Deal?
Space pirate leader: Deal.

And so Earth was now back in the hand of the Terrans.
That's all for now!

Sorry.

Chapter 3:An unexpected call.
On the Soaring Knight, one of the bridge's radar officers had caught his eyes on something, it was a planet.
Radar officer: Sir you better check this out.
John:It's a planet and it has an abanndoned colony on it.Quickly pull out the star map to see what planet it is.
A large map of the quadrent appears along with the planet and it's name.
John:It can't be, that planet is Dithlr! Prepare to land!
Radar officer: What for?
John: Because that's were the Korath Clan used to have weapons labs!We need to explore the old labs to destroy any old research projects!
Just then the ships viewscreen turns on and there was Hitheous, emperor of the Thalan Empire.
John: Hello Hitheous, what is it?
Hitheous: We asssssssk a favor of you.
John:Tell me.
Hitheous: We need you to retreve usssssss a device from one of the labssssss on Dithlr?
John:Why can't your people do it themselves?
Hitheous:Because the lab isssssssss heavily defended by advance sssssecurity and our people our are not good fightersssssss, bessssidessss after what we heard about what you did on Earth you musssst be great fightersssss.
John:We'll do it, but in return you must give us 250,000 BC.
Hitheous:Excellent, we'll have a collecter sssship arrive assss ssssssoon asssss you clear the ssssurface of any hosssssstilessss.
The Soaring Knight heads towrds Dithlr.
Chapter 4 coming soon!

Dude, WHAT?

Chapter 5:The legend of the Arnorian Blade of light
Deep within the vents John had found a vent that leads to an abandoned landing pad and on it was a ship that looked like a Thalan transport that was all black.
John:Crap!
The transport takes off.
John sees a TK landing pod arrive.
John:Oh great, i'm saved.
The pod opens and John heads inside and the pod flys into space.
Later on board the Soaring Knight, John soon learns that the Dexilians have nearly taken over the galaxy.
John:What about our allies?
Officer:They too will suffer like the galaxy.
John:Is their a way we can stop them.
Officer:Well there is the legendary Arnorian Blade of Light.
John:The what?
Officer:The Arnorian Blade of Light,you know the one from the legend.
John:Never heard of the legend.
Officer:The story goes like this.Before the war between the Arnor and Dread Lords,the Arnor created 5 giant mechanical beings called "The Galactic Gaurdians" whose purpose was to maintain peace, the five included Galar the Knight of life whose blade and shield represents the the power all of the life in the galaxy, Shiler the Warrior of justice whose armor represented the strength of justice and order in the galaxy and also made her hard to defeat in combat, Arhcees the archer who represented the balance of intellegence by fire directly at a target and bullseye it by acuretly calculating the distance, Caloria the jouster whose ability to time travel and fast speeds represented time.
John:What about the fifth?
Officer:The fith was like the evil step-child of the family and was call Dreadlar was a pure evil,hate filled, squid shaped deamon and was so evil that the Arnor had locked it away in the same pocket universe that the Dread Lords were put in.
John:If he was so evil, why did they create him?
Officer:He was an accident created by an atempt to create a fifth gaurdian.
John:Oh.
Officer:When the Dread Lords arrived in that pocket universe they found Dreadlar so when they broke out the took him with them.Durng the war, the Galactic Guardians and Dreadlar had fought an epic battle that ended with the Guardians and Dreadlar.But the reamins of the guardians together formed the Arnorian blade of Light.It's said that the remains of Dreadlar was hidden somewere in a planet surrounded by a asteroid field, the Arnor placed the spirit of Dreadlar in a device that was hidden on what is now Dithlr and the Arnorian Blade of light was placed in a temple on an unkown planet.
John:We need to find that blade!
Officer:It's been lost for centuaries!No one knows were it is!
John:Damn it!