theStormWeaver

Very good! Not only are you skilled at the text book style of writing, but you know how to write a great story from a more personal perspective. Good show!

ROFL, exactly! Or by having your main characters alternate selves go back in time to fix the mistake they made when they went back the first time (I covered the whole range of emotions we all felt from m

I don't mean to nitpick or anything, cause I like this story, its great, but you need to work on your structure. Indent new paragraphs and start new ones when someone different begins speaking. Also, you forgot a couple quotation marks. Anyway, good job and keep up the good work!

Sweet! My AAR is up there! (The Endoran Coalition of Worlds) I didn't realize there were so many AARs, it seems most of them were posten on different sites (from this one). P.S. I [I]am[/I] going to finish my AAR, promise.

I like how you made your own twist on the Thalan and their reason for going back in time, and then found a way to undo it all that wasn't completely lame/retarded.

Uh-oh!

I think this would be the time to set thy neighbor against one another, lol.

I totally agree with Zenicetus, It would take away from the rest of the game. If the devs focused so much on realism than turns would be measured in months, and it would take years to make a planet usable. Populations would be measured in millions instead of billions, and my head would explode trying to manage the economy. When a game gets too real it becomes a massive vortex of fun-suck. There is enough micro involved in medium maps and larger, I don't want anymore!

I'll pass on your praise to cyto Drengin, and spread the word about I-Mod and the Stargate TC Mod whenever you can, and whenever its appropriate

Hey, this is theStormWeaver from the Stargate Mod Team. I thought some of you would like to see some of the work the team has accomplished. More specifically team member cytosine. [IMG]http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n272/theStormWeaver/SG_Ships.jpg[/IMG] You may notice that the Alkesh is alittle distorted, but cyto has fixed that mesh since this capture was taken. You can find more/better captures [link="http://www.i-mod-productions.com/showthread.php?t=762"]here

Okay, that makes sense (your extended dating system). That even makes population growth on the GalCivII scale slightly more believable. Because going from 500 million to several billion in any length of time short of 100 years or more is just plain crazy.

This is a pretty good AAR, the best part is how it was an actual struggle to win this game, and you (both the player and the reader) didn't know how it would turn out. All in all, its pretty good, but not the greatest.

I didn't mean it as a complaint, and I'm sorry if it came off that way. It was just an observation. For instance, Sam Dragonshadow sounds like an Orc Far Seer, or a Blademaster. Tex Hammersword sounds like it could be a Paladin, or a Beastmaster. I hope you start putting in some story soon.

I eat this technical stuff up, thats one of the reasons why I love Stargate so much. Keep it up Namus.

You could be right Jvstin. I have noticed, however, that the Off Topic forums can get pretty nasty.

Your characters sound like they are heroes from WarCraft III.

Not bad, a few grammar/spelling mistakes, but not bad. Although, I have to admit that AARs based on the Terrans are getting pretty old. If you want this AAR to be a success you'll have to really sell it, make it stand out amongst the many other Terran AARs. Perhaps tell it in a slightly different style, like "Diary of a Terran Soldier", "The Other Shoe", or "Green Pastures." Those are some of the most original AARs ever written, and they are some of the best aswell.

I like it I look forward to further installments.

Oh man, sorry I haven't posted in like, two weeks. The story is in a transition period, and I'm having trouble bridging the gap. But here is the first half of the bridge. Part XIV: Measurements and Calculations... A few minutes later, in Sereg-Thol's office: "Hello Minister, find out anything interesting lately?" "As a matter of fact, mister Prime Minister, I have. A Drengin agent on a Dominion freighter informed us that the escaped Paulosian vessel was spo

Oooo, this sounds exciting

[quote] There seem to be an awful lot of talented and original writers here on the GCII forums. 1st: Themocaw 2nd: Frogboy 3rd: Xpyre 4th: MarshallOneil 5th: thestormweaver Well, at least thats how it is in my book. Updated list: 1st: Themocaw 2nd: Frogboy 3rd: Xpyre 4th: MarshallOneil 5th: BlackJackDavy [/quote] Aww, I've been bumped off your list? I'll just have to work harder then

Looks like someone's heading for trouble

@FireBender: lol, and the replay value is terrible! By the way, did you see the Oct 12th episode of Avatar? Iro is looking pretty awesome @Rasori: That'll do buddy, that'll do...

Sorry I didn't post it when I said I would, real life can be such a pain. Part XIII: Revelation "They consider us their enemy!? But why?!" "Why do you think? You are the only faction in the galaxy that threatens them. With a concerted effort you could eventually take down the Coalition; but it would take several years, trillions of credits, and billions of lives. Of course you would be better off with help, perhaps from myself and Lord Vega here?" "I have

Sorry about that I'll put something up today