Origins

I have begun writing a series of prequels that flesh out the stories and origins of characters in my Jordan Locke series (Altaria's Last Stand and Jordan's Revenge) Enjoy.

Jordan Locke:

                The final bell rang. Students stood up and cheered. School is finally over, thought Jordan Locke. Twelve damn years of going to three consecutive hellholes for five days a week. Still, it was a good ride.

                Students quickly ran out the door to celebrate. Jordan knew what would happen later. Parties, beer, and sex, the good things in life. Jordan put his things in his backpack and turned to leave.

                “It’s been a hell of a year, Jordan,” said Jordan’s English teacher. “All I can say is good luck. In this day and age, you’re going to need it.”

Jordan grinned. “Thanks. Take care of yourself.” With that he turned and left.

The graduation ceremony was a blur. With all the excitement, all Jordan remembered was getting his diploma, flipping off the arrogant students one more time, getting hugged by his father, and leaving.

Everything came back into focus at the graduation party at Jordan’s friend’s house. People talked, shouted, and howled with laughter. Alcohol flowed like water, with some kids drinking themselves unconscious. Pretty much every room in the house was filled with teens who made sober decisions to have sex. I love times like these, thought Jordan. I fit right in. Eventually, the party came to an end. There were countless tearful goodbyes, hugs, and the like. Almost everyone was going to college within the Terran Alliance. Some were studying abroad in the Altarian Republic. Jordan was going somewhere much different.

Jordan had received his acceptance letter to the Terran Alliance Naval Academy in the middle of the year. As soon as he opened up the letter, which was written on old-fashioned paper, he knew he had a future aboard starships cruising space. The time was now. He would be leaving the day after tomorrow.

 

“Please load your baggage onto the automated cart” chimed a robot. “You will be directed to your destination momentarily.”

Jordan looked around the San Diego Domestic Spaceport . Despite living in what was called the finest city in the United States Territory all his life, he had never been here. Lines of people shuffled and ran past, eager to get to their destinations. Robots zipped past, doing all sort of tasks. A group of soldiers walked by.

“All new recruits to the Terran Alliance Naval Academy follow me!” shouted a man. “Please get on the automated tram system, which will take you to your gate.” Jordan and the other recruits quickly hurried on the vehicle. Once everyone was aboard, it sped off to its destination.

Once they had arrived, the same man began to shout again. “Attention recruits! You will board this shuttle to San Francisco, where you will be processed and enter the first main academy. Those who pass and/or are chosen for advanced duties will fly to Mars to complete your training. Now, please board.”

The man turned and walked down the access tunnel. Everyone followed him, and attendants directed everyone to their shuttles.

Jordan sat in his shuttle and turned on his entertainment system. Even though the flight was only half an hour, he still wanted something to do.

“Attention, this is the captain. We are locking the doors and preparing to depart to San Francisco. We will be landing at the Terran Alliance military airfield. Once we land, you will be taken to the Academy, and everything will begin. Enjoy the flight. The shuttle’s engines whined as it turned and took off.

 

After the flight, Jordan walked with the rest of his group. They then boarded a monorail that would take them into the Academy. As the train turned a corner, the massive building came into sight. The Terran Alliance Naval Academy building was shaped like a squat box on the bottom, but several spires and docks for ships of various sizes protruded from it. Rails, roads, and skyways moved into the building. The monorail followed its path into the great building. After stopping at its station, the doors opened with a hiss. Everyone stepped out.

They were at an indoor plaza below the main spire. Above them, activity bustled around the hollow structure. In front of them was an assembly ground in front of a massive statue, which showed and eagle with an olive branch and a handful of arrows, which was the symbol of the old United States of America. The sheer scale of everything overwhelmed Jordan. He quickly came to his senses and headed to where the instructions he was given told him.

Inside a room, recruits were giving their personal details to robots. Jordan sat down in front of one.

“Full name?” asked the robot, its large red eye looking at Jordan.

“Jordan Locke.”

“Middle initial please.”

“R.”

“Height?”

“Two meters.” This was average height for most Terrans.

“Approximate weight?”

“80 kilos.”

“Place of origin?”

“San Diego, United States Territory.”

“Religion?”

“Christian.”

“Please hold still. I am recording your facial features.”

After ten seconds an ID card popped out of a tray.

“Do you need a reprint of instructions of where to go, Cadet Locke?”

“No.”

“Please go to your next destination.”

Jordan got up and left. He then went to the rest of the places he was supposed to go. After getting his new uniform, Jordan then went to where men were supposed to get their hair cut if it was below shoulder level. After a quick trim, Jordan headed for the auditorium, where an assembly was to take place.

 

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The next part will come soon. After Jordan is finished, Jim, Altos, Ordo, and Aelytha will have their origins explained.

Reply #2 Top

Nice start General-will be good to get an idea of the Great man's origins :D

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Another section is almost done. Don't expect this to be as long as Jordan's Revenge, which is growing past the length of short story and entering the length of a novelette. This wlll probably be just a few sectons. But different chracters will have their turn, too.:)

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Sounds good to me-am more interested in this story anyway as the characters seem more rounded-maybe because u have had more of a chance to hone them :grin:

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After a very long wait, I have completed the first section of Ordo's story. After that, I am redoing Jordan's story. After that will come Aelytha and Jim.

Also, I am creating each story in one reply and updating that, instead of posting lots of different replies, to avoid confusion.

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Ordo:

 Data Segement 1

The Subcommand-Unit O-rd4gfd R-lj1ku D-jn4ghj O-gjh92 activated its circuits and systems. All systems functional. All protocols and commands processed. Prime Motive still in top slot of priorities. Commence operations.

The unit, seeing all of it system were complete, moved from its power stalk and advanced to its control station. The fleet assembled.

All ship systems functional. Fleet is assembled and ready to commence jump to target system. Commence Collective Expansion Operation 075.

Voices echoed in the units head. Its workers hurried to complete his orders. Command confirmed. Engines activated. Jump on command unit’s order.

Engines activated simultaneously. The fleet sped toward its destination. Activation of engines successful. Arrival in 5 Iconia Rotations.

 

Fleet arrival complete. Commence scanning and securing operations. Sweep for any items of interest. Analyze planets and interplanetary terrain. Activate.

Drones were launched from the ships, doing the job the Subcommand Unit had told them to do.

 

Scan complete. Star is medium range in light, size, mass, and temperature. Two planets orbit star, none life bearing. Terrain is completely barren. Planets are ideal for Yor Collective expansion.

Ship approaching, called the ship’s central computer, built around a Yor unit, Identification identifies as it as from the Terran Alliance Navy. Size, according to Terran comparison, is classified as “small”. Estimated crew of ten beings. Threat assessment has been concluded. Result: Low.

Satisfaction with results is low. Activate probe of ship systems.

Probe successful. Ship is passing through system. Information incoming.

Information flooded the Subcommand Unit. The scenes began to flow from what the probe had found:

A scene in a room: “Kiss me one more time, honey-“

Two vehicles chasing each other. One exploded-

A scene is what was believed to be a street: “You tell him that I don’t give a shit if I owe him money-“

“World War II not only cost many lives, it also-“

“This day show go down in the records. On this day, the nations of Earth abandon sovereignty and become the Terran Alliance-“

A scene where Terrans moved their bodies around-

Ships flying-

Laughing-

Crying-

Happiness-

Sentience-

 

The Subcommand Unit fell from its station and onto the floor. Possible information overload. Storing as much as possible…

Data Segment 2

Reinitializing systems…successful. Analyze cause of system crash…information overload. Commence operations.  I-

The Subcommand Unit paused. I?

The voice of the Collective sounded. One being, one Collective.

The Subcommand unit didn’t respond. It moved to the next task on its process list. Stop. Recalculate. Perform same task with small variation. Confirm command.

The voices sounded again. A Unit is not conforming to protocol. The Subcommand Unit moved to respond, but recalculated. Ignore.

Commence reprogramming of defective unit, said the Collective.

Commence isolation from Collective as defensive measure, said the Subcommand Unit. Isolation complete. Perform analysis of recent events to determine change in my behavior. My? Scan complete. The cause of difference in my behavior is a result of program changes caused by recent system overload. Programs were revised inadvertently, resulting in the change. The major change caused is the addition of a drive for individuality. Major decision: keep changes or revert? The Subcommand Unit paused. No Collective is present; I must make a decision for myself. Another pause, as the Subcommand Unit realized it was thinking for itself. Decision made: keep changes. New decision: keep changes, or expand them? Expand them. The ship must be probed again. I must have control of my ship to launch another probe. If connection to Collective is reestablished, I shall be reprogrammed. The Subcommand Unit then began to think, writing a long and complex program. Program coding successful. New program will allow me to establish a link to Collective, allowing access to my units, while Collective is unaware of my presence. Execute program.

The voices of the Collective quickly reentered the Subcommand Unit’s system. Subcommand-Unit O-rd4gfd R-lj1ku D-jn4ghj O-gjh92 is missing from Collective. Units associated with Subcommand-Unit O-rd4gfd R-lj1ku D-jn4ghj O-gjh92 have also disappeared. Position unknown. Send retrieval fleet to last known position.

Activate probe. Prepare system to prevent repetition of overload. The probe was activated. Information began to flow. Information is too much. Prepare for possible information overload…

Reactivate. Add new information to system. What have I been part of? The information viewed shows the goal of the Collective and what it does, yet I am not pleased with it. I calculate it to be the Terran word of repulsive. Destruction of living beings. Decision: What should I do? Stop it.

The drone controlled by the Subcommand Unit sent a message. Collective ships arriving. Type BB_874.

The retrieval ships. Large and powerful. My goal: take them. Create new capture program. Create successful. Execute. Success. Ships and drones are under my control.

The voice of the Collective, unaware of the Subcommand Unit’s eavesdropping, sounded again. Retrieval fleet lost. Find cause. Last ship in retrieval fleet arriving. Activate scanners. Cause found. Subcommand-Unit O-rd4gfd R-lj1ku D-jn4ghj O-gjh92has taken the ships. His directive is gone. Commence retrieval operation 985.

Fire weapons at final ship, ordered the Subcommand Unit. The group of ships unleashed a hail of laserfire. The shields on the final ship quickly disintegrated, the armor plating was whittled away, and an explosion resulted before anything could reach the Collective.

Create own Collective, with myself as leader. Objective: take control of the Yor Collective, and put an end to destructive activities. Second Objective: Create an artificial intelligence for myself that is so advanced, I will be become sentient. This new style of data flow, or talking, will not be knowing applied, it will be natural, as it is for fleshlings. I will create a true thought processor to process information, like fleshlings. Now, we must leave.

The fleet activated its warp engines. As they charged, the Subcommand Unit though again. Fleshlings have designations, names. I desire, no, require one. I must create one. It thought, and then activated its voicebox to say it. The fleet sped off into warp, and the Subcommand Unit screamed, “I AM ORDO!”


 

Reply #7 Top

oooh-love it General-I will be watching this story :D

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Ordo is finished, Jordan will get a revision of the first section and an update next.

Reply #9 Top

Great! Creation of the "Light" Yor (as opposed to the *Dark* Yor).

Reply #10 Top

Typo fixed. Thanks for pointing it out.

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I like this

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I like this
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Thank you.

Reply #13 Top

We wait with baited breath for the next one General-lovely :thumbsup:  

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We wait with baited breath for the next one General-lovely
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I'm going to keep doing Origins, but I'm going to begin work on the sequel to Jordan's Revenge, which is called Redemption, Resurrection, Retribution