This is my first crack at making a story so bear with me.

 Location: Unkown planet, War: Precusor Civil War, Side: Arnor

The dread lords have landed on the planet. The indigenous population has been massacred with few left to fight. We have been forced to make a stand at the mountains. I am leading about 20 Arnor and 600 natives, so we have a small chance of winning. Even though we are a powerful race, we Arnor have never focused on killing. That was the Dread Lords preference. Because of are lack in military power, we have resorted to arming the natives of a planet. It is sad to do this, training a species to fight with weapons even before they can learn to write. The Dread Lords only come in small numbers, but their energy that comes from their very hands is very deadly. To protect the natives we have constructed shields that can hold of the energy beams for a little while, while the natives fight in hand to hand combat, it is mayhem the natives fighting with complete desperation, while the Dread Lords move in a fluid motion killing them in the most painful way possible, they are quite good at that, while looking at a old Dread Lord fort we found many instruments of torture. It is a shame to see are brethren to become so evil, but it is time to think about what is happing now. Are only hope for today is to be rescued by our ships, but it appears the Dread Lords wish to fight now, May are shields hold out.

-Unknown Arnor Leader

Location: Unknown planet, War: Precusor Civil war, Side: Dread Lords

It is a shame to see our brethren so blind to what is happing, thinking that these natives will never try to kill us all. The Iconians should be enough proof, building the Yor, and even asking for more power. I hope our little surprise will teach those Iconians a lesson. The Arnor battle plan of protecting this native scum is only showing how blind they really are. Are battle plan is simple. Kill everything that is not one of us. All we need is 8 Dread Lords and we are done. It is a pleasure to see are energy blasts go right into these insects; Heads being blown off, entire bodies being vaporized, and their screams for mercy being cut off with a single hand motion. We are really doing this scum a favor, they will never become as great as us, and no matter what that will never change. After we clear this planet we are going to the home worlds of the Arnor to finish them once and for all. And after that we are going to this new planet we just discovered, they say the people there are 12 feet tall. There some saying they will even break the record of species lasting the longest without Arnor help, the record right now is 2 days. The Dread Lords in charge of that mess-up were tortured for letting them live so long. Time to kill some of these insects, for are people!

-Unknown Dread Lord

So what do you think, any way I can improve it? Do you think it is to short?