Quality of the Text
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Examining a preliminary screenshot of the game (which displays a newsflash about Defense System) I've found several errors in the text. Here are the excerpts from the text:
1.Just waiting for us out in the depths are space are hostile ... - first 'are' should be 'of'
2.Equiping - should be 'equipping'
3.These shields would act as an energy field around our ships that absorb damage - plural form of the verb is used, instead of a singular one. Should be 'absorbs'.
Is the text in final version of the game THAT bad? Who's the corrector out there who did a bad job?
1.Just waiting for us out in the depths are space are hostile ... - first 'are' should be 'of'
2.Equiping - should be 'equipping'
3.These shields would act as an energy field around our ships that absorb damage - plural form of the verb is used, instead of a singular one. Should be 'absorbs'.
Is the text in final version of the game THAT bad? Who's the corrector out there who did a bad job?
Also I've to add that English isn't my native language. Anyway, the errors I've found are clearly visible at a glimpse even for me.
) I think there is a right to decry the quality of the product. So I agree with you basically.... those books are bad -especially the teaching ones and show a real lack of quality.